July 6th, 2008 at 08:10pm
Nice, interesting article, but I felt you could have wrapped it up a little better with a more defined conclusion. Tears May Stain said, "The point?" mainly, I think because your article seemed to be lacking the conclusion. I did like the facts and I thought, other than what I've mentioned, it was pretty well written.
Just my opinion of course. =]
Also, I think what you've said at the end isn't totally right - not all models become celebritys over night, not all of them become actors or singers, in fact very few do.