September 16th, 2012 at 12:01am
This is a well-written article!
The only thing I would've liked to see is your sources cited in the text. I know you put them at the end, but sometimes it helps to have them at the end of the paragraph/sentence you used. Especially if someone was using your article for research!
Awesome article!
thank you! I always put my sources at the end, and having a source in a language most people here wouldnt understand, I figured it wouldn't be very useful :s