This was probably one of the most interesting people I have ever read about. I like how your tone towards him is so admiring and respectful, anyone reading this article can't help but to feel the same way. Your organization is of ideas is great; you have so many facts in this article but it never reads like a list. I also thought it was very clever to list his involvement in well known events towards the beginning, a great way to draw in readers who have never heard of them. I'm assuming much of what you wrote came from personal knowledge, but for the purpose of the contest the only real area I see room for improvement is citing sources. This was an awesome article, thanks for entering the contest!
July 28th, 2010 at 12:58am