For Firsts, Girls and for the worst - Comments

OMG. John, this is slightly..wait a bit more than slightly creepy. Okay, listen, Beth doesn't like you. I know it sucks, but get over it. I agree on the stalking bit. And she knew Dylan was you in the first place, the only reason she talked to him was probably because she didn't have to see him at school.
And why do you have to be so depressing.
Just ask izzie out, she seems really nice and she actually likes you, even though its slightly sad you had to hang around with people in a different year.

Wow. Ditto on everyone elses thing. And try not to swear so much. If you wann swear censor is. like this- Sh*t.

Oi. How many times am i gunna have to do this talk.
Once more obviously.
Okay. You're 13. I know you think you're all grown up cuz you're in mibble school and everything. And i'm sure this Beth girl is very nice, but I highly doubt you were in love. I don't know you so I won;t way you weren't, but if she doesn't wanna talk to you that doesn't mean go suicidal. Life isn't so drmatic as you think. other girls will come. in a fwe years I'm sure some other girl wil be tormenting your little hormone filled brain.
Sorry to crush your dreams or something, but I know this stuff. Trust me.
And from a girls point of you, what you did was sweet, but just a tad creepy. If a girl doesn't wanna talk she doesn't wanna talk. It's nice that you made the effort to tlak to her so much, but the whole dylan thing was a bit wierd and ah invasion of her privacy.
The reason she talked to Dylan is becuase he wasn't really REAL. She knew that. He was some boy from somewhere else and he talked to her and listened to her. She didn't have to deal with him at school and he wouldn;t tell her secrets- even if he did, who would care? If he told it would to be to no one she knew.
Phew. That done.
Once again, I don't mean to offend you or anything. I'm just trying to lighten the attitude a little. Life can be fun. find something else to care about instead of this girl. take up a hobby. Maybe after you stop paying so much attention to her, she might realize she actually misses you.
idk. Love is complicated sometimes, but it doesn't always have to be.

I can't even-
Its.
Hm.
*Smashes face against keyboard*
I still can't even read this.
Grammar.
Please, for the love of god, use it.

Also, breaking your entry up into paragraphs will make it easier for people to read. 'Cause as of right now, it's far too daunting to even attempt. :-/

Sorry, dude.

E.

You need to watch your capitalization, grammar, and punctuation. It's a mandatory rule to write properly here on Mibba, so please do so. It makes your entries easier to read for the rest of us. ;)

I'm just giving you a heads up because you could potentially get banned. ;)