I'm not sure if that layout background goes with everything else. From that little trim and that picture and everything, I'm getting this old time feel. Then all of a sudden, it's like a wooden fence. I dunno. It doesn't mesh well for me.
I love the summary though. It's very short, but it works. It tells me something about the story, but not with a huge amount of details. But it immediately got me interested to know what happened.
I'm going to assume you wanted a comment on here, not on the story because the story hasn't even been posted... And I'd just feel like an ass for telling you about your layout on your story comment page... >.>
1. Absolutely marvellous right now.<3
2. Nothing, I'm done writing for now. :( not onthe mood lately </3
3. Too many to specify. :)