Wanting feed-back? - Comments

  • I'd love that, darling. My name's Scratch - mind doing me a favor and giving me your opinion on ROY G BIV and possibly Dear Katherine (but Dear Katherine only if you have enough time, not necessary)

    They're both original. Dear Kat is my normal kind of unbridled angst but ROY G BIV is my first actual success at fluffiness and I don't want to mess it up.

    Thank you so much, hon. I think you're wonderful for doing this.
    June 9th, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • Hi! I'm Jean, and I think you're amazing for doing this for writers on mibba! I would love it if you could read my stories. They're called "Is This Really Happening?", "Whatever Happens", and "A Singer AND A Hockey Player? Yikes" All 3 are fan-fictions.
    Again, thanks so much for doing this fo everyone!
    June 9th, 2011 at 08:53pm
  • Ello, love! I'm Serena. I think what your doing is lovely. It's people like you that we need more of on Mibba. In fact, I think you have inspired me. After today, I shall be reading much more and giving out reviews. =D

    Hmm, I have 4 you could choose from, if you wish. You don't have to read them all--if any at all:

    Secrets in the Shadows
    Original Fiction || PG-13 || Fantasy and Adventure
    Jade Danvers is not your normal girl. She has a dark secret that not even she is aware of. Until he shows her.

    Beyond the Stars
    Original Fiction || PG || Fantasy, Romance, and Tragedy
    His one true love was out there. He knew it and would search throughout time for her. But, they never knew that she would be The One.

    Charm of Souls
    Original Fiction || PG || Adventure, Fantasy, and War
    Aalorn Frost wasn't ready to control the kingdom. But, the things she did were unacceptable. It may be the end of everything she has ever known unless she can find the Charm of Souls.

    A Fairytale Gone Sour
    Original Fiction || PG-13 || Drama, Fantasy, and Teen
    It's not nice to be lied to your entire life. Not when the stakes are set so high and you are in the middle of a deadly war.
    June 9th, 2011 at 07:48pm
  • I'm Elaine but I like being called WTF. This story is sort a modern van helsing it's classic demons/vampires you know holy water and stakes through heart, and a priest/exorcist hunting them down. It takes place in Italy and revolves around stopping a plan to increase vampire rule over humans and also make them immune to sunlight. Demoni Della Morte

    It's actually very old and I was gonna throw it but decided to try it again. So I don't mind lots of criticism. Btw did you use to be famousxhat?
    June 9th, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • Hi, I'm Sadie and I'd appreciate some feedback.
    I'm considering deleting and rewriting Broken City Sky (which is a fanfic but you don't need to know a thing. It's about 9/11, just warning you...) so I'd like a little bit of feedback on it to make it better.
    Capitol--another fan-fic but again, you don't need to know anything--as well, just because I'm stuck and feedback gives me inspiration (do not ask why.)
    Thank you!
    June 9th, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • I would like that. My name's Annie. Can you check out two of my stories, Dream Garden and Mutual Needs? Both are fanfiction slash. I'd appreciate it if you do. Thank you. ^_^
    June 9th, 2011 at 04:36pm