April 30th, 2013 at 06:54pm
I agree with all of this. I mean unless the two said two love interests knew each other for a long extended period of time (like let's say since childhood), they wouldn't be falling in love right away. But unfortunately there are loads of young writers on here who will snap and bitch at you (people in general) for "hating" their stories when anyone who try telling them this kinda thing. It happened to me on wattpad, which is why I just stopped going there.
I tend to just ignore those stories and move on. Most people on here don't understand that you need to have someone else read your work before posting it. Having more than one set of eyes reading a story is good. That way they can catch mistakes both grammatically and plot wise. I've never personally tried giving constructive criticism on here, because I'm not sure how most people would react seeing as their stories get more... "I love this so much!" and "Update soon." comments than actually reviews.