June 29th, 2013 at 03:57pm
@ daikirai desu.
Oh. I wasn't sure about the words. :) I don't know much about that language. Although Japanese was my first guess.
& yeah, that was the biggest thing. If you do get better at that, you're story would be a lot better. It's just one of those things that make or break a story for me. (: And as for the pasts, I'm glad you've got that planned. I didn't know.
I wanted the characters to become close and then have their pasts revealed in dialogue