Okay so I've just left you a massively long comment on the story, so I'll try and keep this one shorter haha!
I'd LOVE to find out more about how they met Ray, and more about the Way's back story. All that really fascinated me.
I'm unsure what I feel about the alternative 'ending', but I'm sure if I read the chapters I'd be able to make a decision on that one way or the other. with your writing skills though, I'm sure it would be fantastic.
I'm actually glad Frank and Gerard didn't get back together in the story. I definitely think you made the right decision there, and I definitely think it works well with your story!
I'm sorry I can't be your beta, I work too much to be able to give a valuable enough opinion. I'd love to do it, but I just don't have the time. I hope you find some though!
I really am going to miss this story, and I hope we can stay in contact through tumblr!
I'd LOVE to find out more about how they met Ray, and more about the Way's back story. All that really fascinated me.
I'm unsure what I feel about the alternative 'ending', but I'm sure if I read the chapters I'd be able to make a decision on that one way or the other. with your writing skills though, I'm sure it would be fantastic.
I'm actually glad Frank and Gerard didn't get back together in the story. I definitely think you made the right decision there, and I definitely think it works well with your story!
I'm sorry I can't be your beta, I work too much to be able to give a valuable enough opinion. I'd love to do it, but I just don't have the time. I hope you find some though!
I really am going to miss this story, and I hope we can stay in contact through tumblr!
Laura xo