I Wanted to Make a Comment on Latest Chapter of 'Sent in Gray' So You All Know Where I'm Coming From. (Chapter 45, Contains Spoilers~) - Comments

  • brileigh

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    @ aswesleepwewalk
    No problem!
    April 25th, 2014 at 03:19pm
  • andherewegoagain

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    @ DannyWor
    I don't know what's going to happen, you'll just have to wait and see. (I do actually know though...)
    April 22nd, 2014 at 11:58pm
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    @ amber extermination.
    aw you're so sweet. thank you so much. :')
    April 22nd, 2014 at 11:57pm
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    @ OfMiceAndKayla
    Hahah no it didn't honestly. I was kind of glad you reminded me haha.
    April 22nd, 2014 at 11:55pm
  • OfMiceAndKayla

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    @ aswesleepwewalk
    I do, and I was actually expecting to see a LOT of those too but people just were like "this was great." to sum it up. I'm pretty sure it was because they (me as well) were in shock and were sad & worried. I'm really looking forward to what's coming up though, and idk if I ever thanked you for the notebook thing xD thb I'm sorry that I was pestering you about that, I'm sure it got annoying.
    April 22nd, 2014 at 11:11pm
  • DannyWor

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    Don't kill Justin. Please don't. This is so sad and feels real in a weird way. Don't do it though it's to many emotions
    April 22nd, 2014 at 10:28pm
  • amber extermination.

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    Very sad, but it feels so real at the same time. I don't really feel like I'm reading a fan fiction, it's more like I'm reading an actual book. I mean, you put a lot of thought into it and there's actual morals to take from reading. And you've done a fantastic job at developing the characters. When they're sad, you feel sad. I hope to be a writer like you one day. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Xx
    April 22nd, 2014 at 10:17pm
  • andherewegoagain

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    @ OfMiceAndKayla
    well at least you understand haha. I was really afraid of checking my comments this morning because I felt like I was going to get the mob of hate comments I got when Austin and Alan broke up tbh haha.
    April 22nd, 2014 at 07:38pm
  • OfMiceAndKayla

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    @ aswesleepwewalk
    THAT'S IT! THAT'S WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN! XD ugh, I know but like still I just have this really bad feeling that its bad, like, I don't know how to explain it. I've been wrong before though, so.

    It's alright I've been pretty okay about it, you just made me cry a little thinking about all the bad stuff Justin might be in for and yeah. But no that makes sense to me, you want it to make sense but you want to say everything perfectly, but also you don't want to say too much but not wanting to stop? I don't know I feel like that sometimes. There's always a reason for things in the story, no one decides to make something bad happen to a character just because they can, not unless it needs to happen for the sake of the story.

    Aw -//U//- thank you <3
    April 22nd, 2014 at 07:14pm
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    @ brileigh
    aw thanks :') I'm glad I succeeded!
    April 22nd, 2014 at 05:15pm
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    @ OfMiceAndKayla
    :') I could just see my future desk piled high with little letters with Chapter 3 --WHY? and that's it haha. Well you don't know if Justin's going to die or not, silly. It could still go either way as I haven't mentioned what's wrong with him. ;)

    I'm sorry about your experience and if I rekindled feelings about it. My own experience had nothing to do with driving, honestly, it was drugs instead. The chapter was hard to write, but I found writing this blog harder, if that makes sense. I kept stopping and rewriting because I really felt this information was necessary to those who needed it. I wanted people to know that it wasn't just thrown in there for shits and giggles.

    You're the best :*
    April 22nd, 2014 at 05:15pm
  • OfMiceAndKayla

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    You definitely have a way of breathing life to this story, and someday I kind of hope you go on to be an author of things bigger than fan fiction, because you'd get a fan letter from me every chapter :) (more than likely expressing my feels and how much of an A+ Job you did, despite my possible anger tword what you did). I'm probably going to end up sobbing when Justin inevitably passes, because I just know that that's where this is going. I'm okay with it however, and I'm prepared, because what ever helps you get a little closure, or maybe get safe driving pounded into our heads, is fine and dandy because it's your story and you can do whatever you want. I'll still love it, everyone will still love it (and all the best writers have to kill a character or two, that's what makes them amazing). This chapter really actually got to me on more of a personal level because of what happened to Justin, I'm obviously not going to go into it, but I had something similar happen a few years back. Thank you by the way for this, and I'm sorry that this chapter may have been hard for you to write (but if it wasn't then uhh oops) because I have a hard time writing chapters here and there just because of the content. You're an amazing writer, and I really hope you don't ever stop.
    April 22nd, 2014 at 04:55pm
  • BittersweetRevenge

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    It was really sad but it did make it that much more realistic.
    April 22nd, 2014 at 03:12pm
  • brileigh

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    I loved it either way. You're definitely succeeding in makin it seem realistic. Thank you for the wonderful update.
    April 22nd, 2014 at 12:52pm