why is everything so crap at the moment?

my life, in short, at the moment, is actually rubbish.

i got told by this guy that i wasnt giving him enough space, i was like WHAT THE HELL? i mean, the thing is that he was saying that im never quiet on msn, when he is always the first one to speak to me in my conversations, he speaks to me so soon when i sign into messenger it sometimes crashes, so what on earth hes going on about i have no idea. ive been told by his best friend though at the moment give him some space because hes going through a bad time at his sort of part time job to fill in after school, so yeah, maybe thats just the reason for all the grouchiness.

Also, i am terribly ill, and as we all know, creativity is not at its peak EVER, when one is ill, so basically i do feel a little bit bad. i want to vomit, have a dreadful sore throat and a blocked nose, and im speaking funnily as a result.

GREAT.

lol

i already have a subscriber to my story, which i dont know how that works because i am really recent to mibba, i mean ive had it for a few months, but i mean ive barely ever been on it to be honest.
i use my myspace more =]
but thats not aimed at a young creative writing audience such as this website.

ok, so ive written my first story, where do i go from here?

well, by saying this im not trying to drum up readers, but really, i need comments on how the whole thing is, how i can improve it, and whether or not i should write a sequel. i have been told by many to write a sequel, but im just not sure what about.

also dont be put off by the fact that its thirty chapters long, most of the chapters arent long enough to even need a scroll bar down the right hand side of the screen =]

nighty night lovies =]

xxx