New Story Complicated!

Hey wats up?
I just posted my first here on Mibba.
And i would like some feedback on it! Thanks!

Ok well here are the characters for my story:

Joanna or Jojo Scott (played by jojo the singer)

Drew Scott (Played by Drew Ryan Scott from VFC)

Skyler Harrison (played by Laura Vandervoort from the show Instant Star)

Thomas Fiss (played by Thomas Fiss from VFC)

Hayden Christensen (played by Hayden Christensen from the movie Jumper)

David Brandt (played by David Brandt from VFC)

Jessie Hudgens (played by Vanessa Hudgens)

So, basically this story is about Jojo and how she chooses the right guy for her. As you can see the title COMPLICATED so yea. I'll update when I can. So feel free to message me.And this is my first story so criticism is very helpful!!

~♥Miranda♥~