My Song: "Why"

I love writing songs and this is one of them. If I ever hear about someone stealing my songs I will be pissed. I wrote this song for a close family friend who committed suicide. Tell me what you think.

Every time I saw your smile,
I would laugh, for awhile,
But now I cry

Why'd you have to go,
I really miss you so,
Our hearts are still together,
But why'd you have to go

If you would've come to me,
I would've understood,
Even though your older than me

Why'd you have to go,
I really miss you so,
Our hearts are still together,
But why'd you have to go

Why

I know it's short,but I still like it.
February 14th, 2009 at 08:34pm