My stories

Okay, so my 'I Hate You...No, I wasn't being Sarcastic' story is awfully hated by me, and probably by all the rest of you. But maybe you will like 'If I fell in love with books i would have told you.' Please read it and tell me what you think. I love to improve my writing. I know that I have a couple of errors in my writing, I know that some of the ideas are sucky but I need you guys' help! I need improving! Most of all I need to improve 'I Hate You..' please tell me what I can do with it!
and as you may have noticed I'm repeating things because this has to be 100 words -_-''
Seriosuly, I don't know what else to put in this post.

Thanks.
~Gabriela