I need something for english, something on my view on the afterlife. This is what I have so far:
Dying is an unexplainable feeling.
First, you get pins and needles in your toes, and it works you way up to your head, so you whole body is buzzing. You can feel the blood freeze in its tracks, your heart stop beating, the oxygen refusing to come into your lungs. Panic erupts throughout your body.
You can still hear the people around you, shaking you, screaming at you to hold on, screaming for the doctor to save you. And you're screaming "save me!", but no one can hear you. Probably because you're not saying anything. Probably because you're dead.
You can feel the tears lading on your body, you hear the sobs and screams of "why didn't you save him?!" you hear the doctor's fake apologies filled with fake remorse—they do this every day, they're not paid enough to care—and then you hear nothing but a faint buzz, you're heart pounding—not that you have one—and you're heavy pants—not that you're breathing, either.
Originially it was longer, many chapters based of TBP when i was into MCR... this is the part I'm going to use...cuz that story WAS quite pwnsome.(:
BUT SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME WRITE THE REST PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE?!?
i'll repay the favorrr
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