phew....

I just changed my grammer all around V.V I'll probobly still be asked to make the text smaller, oh, and
I know I asked for critisism but I also wanted imput on my actual story, a girl just went off on my grammer, what about my thoughts my story line my lead up? what about the story should I just trash it? what do you think of that? why didn't she even talk about my story why only grammer? god sometimes it makes me so angry when all they do is complain about something easy, I just kinda didn't care about the grammer, but now I'm putting it all in ...I was kinda wanting to know if it's even worth it to throw in the grammer if the story's gonna be bad... <.> why can't I just get REAL critisism? thanks to all the others who commented on my story even positive things help me :)