Yeah, I'm really sorry about that one.
I'm not going to stop working on it (in fact, I'm working on an update right now) but what I am going to do is restructure it and then repost it.
I think the fact that it's one big chronological tale is really screwing me up and making it difficult for me to shine as a writer. I honestly believe that I am good at writing (even though sometimes I totally think I suck) and so I want to make this really good for all of you who actually bother to read it. I think you'll really like what I've decided to do with it. :D
But for the moment, I think I'm going to work on my one shots for contests, and it would be super if people could read those once I finish them. Dankeschon.
-exhaustion-
Molly [is really sorry about sucking]