LAWL @ Critique my singing, =]

Faaalal! So, I'm a 14 year old girl who does recordings with her daddio in a basement. As simple as that. ^^

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Just looking for some critique. If you like it, yes, no.
WHy you don't like it, why you do like it...
^^ I can't get any real critique at home,
I always get stuck with the parent answers, "OH HON, YOUR AMAZING. KEEP IT UP, YAAAY." it's like.. uh huh. sure.

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I don't care how hash the critique is really, haha.
I can upload some more, I think. ^^