Hey Mibbians

I need opinions or thoughts about my stories.

I'm hoping that you guys could take the time and read what I've written and help me through the story and make the story and me better. I'd really appreciate it. I can't say I'm any good in any story I write, but I am hoping to get better. I'm also trying to pursue a job or a career as an author.

I really am hoping that you guys do help. Just a heads up the story is about Romance. I just started on the story so it's only one chapter. Sorry.