Where are all the Talents? GAH

I keep seeing poem after poem that makes me want to scoop my eyes out as I read. And I'm not saying I'm a great writer at all. Yes it IS up to the reader. But where in all this poetry is there originality?
The structure, the word usage....its so...BLA. Either the writer is concerned about the rhyming scheme or if they've repeated their point enough. Ending up making the poem...a black hole of shit.
I want to hear REAL feelings. Get deeper people.. IM BEGGING YOU.

Yes you might write about love, but forget the obvious. Think of how much is affected by what youre feeling. Think anything.

Think someting actually DIFFERENT.
November 14th, 2009 at 01:40am