Story Idea Advice(comment on my story idea Please)

So I finally got an idea for a story and I want to know if you guys think it is good. Don't be afraid to be brutally honest with me. That's what I need. Okay so here it goes.

Lily Woods has always had an active imagination but let's just say it doesn't stay imaginary for long. Lily has the ability to make her imagination a reality. Although this ability hasn't made it easy for her to make friends. But she does have one trustworthy friend named Ty. As she gets older her imagination becomes easier to control. But what happens when she imagines a world that takes over ours? Will she be able to shut down her own imagination? With the help of her friend Ty and her mom, maybe she can overcome the biggest test of her life.

I hope that is a good enough descripition. I'm not sure if its any good so I thought I would ask your guys opinion. Please be honest and straightforward. If you hate it tell me. If you like it let me know.
December 3rd, 2009 at 04:37pm