A offer for those who want reviews on their own work

I am a rather...ignored writer on these site(meaning I really am not known)
I have a offer for the publish who read this, if you can review/critic (in general be honest to what you see as a flaw and so on) one of the chapters of my own work I will do the same to a work of your request. Of course I can not say I am a great one at feedback and otherwise, I will try my best to help you who help me.

Split: Both Ch1, 2
http://stories.mibba.com/read/186963/Split/

Thank you for your time anyone who reads this and have a nice day.