Oh, hello again.

I'm not a journal person, yet for some reason I've been making them lately.

I need your help, guys. I'm not going to blather on about how glad I'd be if you did me this favour; instead, I'm going to get right to the point.

I need you to review my story.

Now before you complain about not wanting to or having read it before, I don't care. And I know this sounds pretty confrontational -- that's because it is.

For some reason, I have a feeling that something isn't right with it. And through that, I just can't seem to add onto it. This isn't a lack of inspiration, because I sure as hell know what's going to happen next, but I feel like I need to fix something before I move on.

So getting a bunch of people to look at it might help me out, because I have read it over numerous times and I just need some new eyes to tear it to pieces for me.

Are you game, guys?

If you could do this, you'd be saving a frustrated teenage girl from many sleepless nights. That and I won't sound so grouchy anymore.

Please? :3

I'll review yours, if that's what it takes! :D