Should I continue my story?

I need help I wrote a story called As Twilight Falls and I need your advice if I should continue it or not.
I won't mind your harsh criticism. Please comment away.
I love it when people criticize me. Haha Weird right?
So yeah, I'm now typing random stuff 'cause mibba won't allow short Journals.
Grr. What to type?
Uhh. Well If you read As twilight Falls it's pretty much like twilight though I'm making as much twitches as I can. It starts from in book one Alec's P.O.V and after a while it will go to Jamie's P.O.V of view.
The difference of this between twilight is that there's no family thing all of the vampire's here have different last names, but.. well I'll explain more in the stroy..
So comments?t, criticism?, advice?
Type away.