Constructive Criticism

Isn't funny how some people can't handle CC?
I think it is hilarious.

The odd point of this journal is that I WANT constructive criticism. I write FanFictions, which I know some people believe are overrated. My goal with my writing is to make it seem realistic, ya'know? Not lame, and superficial.

I am literally begging for someone to check out my story, Love Is Our Weapon, and tell me what I need to improve on. I mean, isn't this site about us becoming better writers?

If anyone wants me to check out anything of theirs, I'm down. I have nothing to do tonight, and I don't mind reading some new stuff.

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thankss.
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