Really need help. please?

Alright, this is really the last time I'll ask for help, honest.

Like I was saying in my last Journal I am applying for a scholarship. Included in this application I can include a piece of writing. This is where it gets tricky, so I am requesting the help of my fellow Mibbians.

Should I give them If You're Broken?
Or...should I give them Smile, Kid?

Both are one-shots (short stories) and are under 1,000 words. If you wouldn't mind, please check them out and leave your feedback here, in the comments.
Thanks so much!!!

I would be happy to comment on a story, poem, etc of yours if you help me. :)

::mrgreen:

Love always,
Kaylee