I've never talked about my own stories?

Mom, I'm Moving Out
My most recent story. Four girls deside to move out, in hopes of getting away from their pasts which they hate. Although, when they reach their destination someone isn't leaving them alone. Trying to be helpfull people, they end up in a situation where they are being beaten, tortured, and raped by their kidnapper. The girls are slowly dying, and have no way of escape. Their kidnappers son is oblivious to their presence in his basement. Unsure of an outcome, they attempt leaving. What will happen to these girls?

It's coming out so amazing, and I really think it's coming to be a great story. The best story I've written. The suspence, and curiousity it leaves you with will keep you wanting to read more and more. Any comments, or subscribers are highly appreciated.

You all are writers yourselves, correct? Well, you understand how comments motivate you to keep writing and give you critism to help you to write better than you did before. So I'd appreciate if you'd leave some comments to my new story. It'll be updated tomorrow night, be prepared for a twist you didn't see coming.
March 15th, 2010 at 12:23am