Poems

Hey guys, I've been taking a creative writing class and decided to post my poems and work done in that class. Also it will be poems I wrote outside of class.
I would really love it, if you guys could tell me what you think.
Is there anything that really stands out? Something I need to work on? Do you have any suggestions? And if possible how it makes you feel?
I really want to strengthen my writing skills. I believe your input will help a lot.

Also I want to thank abc:money.
She is the first person to comment my poems and it really means a lot. It makes me feel great to know that you enjoy and that you like it that much.

Now I understand why people write stories on mibba. Hearing the feedback is a great feeling.
I want to know what you guys think about my work. It would really help me out a lot.

As I go into the Army I will have less time to be on the internet but more time to write. The poems and other peaces of work I write, I will post on here as well. This will really help me get through this long experience/ adventure that I'm about to embark on.

Thanks for your time.
Again, It really means a lot to me.