Read my book? =)

Hello there! =)
So i was wondering if you guys can read my book!
Er- story? Yeah, well it would REALLY mean ALOT to me !
Oh, and when youre done reading it can you comment on it?
I don't care if you subscribe or not...
I just need some critizium. xD
Not too harsh, LOL :P
Oh, all you have to do is click my name (Rhimzii22 :) )
and look under stories.
my only good / potential story is called...
"Through the Broken Mirror."
So just click that and read please ! =)
oh and comment..
Don't forget to comment :)
Thanks much ! :D