New Book!

Hey guys, i have a new book i'm writing but, i need some motivation and need people to read what i have so far :) Xlibris Publishing company is looking into having my book published once completed. I need as much feedback as possible. The story is about three teens that get Saturday detention in the school they go to, which was built 1843. They are seated in desks placed in the center of the long dark hallway only lit by the 'exit signs' and during their stay from 5am-12 noon they experience EXTREME paranormal activity while the instructor steps out for a phone call. Please check out the first chapter. 2nd chapter coming in a bit! Spread the word please! ----> http://stories.mibba.com/read/266296/Scared/