O.k. so i'm writing a new poem. I haven't really written anything for a long time so I sort of have writer's block. My poem is going to be called Pretty Porcelain Doll. It starts off like this:
Pretty porcelain doll sits on her shelf.
Nobody sees her sitting there
for she goes unnoticed.
She justs sits there, lifeless.
If only the world knew what she was hiding
behind her perfect smile.
I need suggestions on what else to put in it and I also need to know if this is a good start or if this sounds like crap.
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