Please read my stories :)

Hi, everyone! :) Just started writing a story! (At last!) Please read my story, "Where Are You Now?" I'd like to know what you think about it so I can improve my writing. I know it is a bit boring but please do read it! And thank you for reading my journal! Oh, before I forgot, do you know some good books I can read?
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