I just got reported..

and it's not like I don't care, since I do but I'm not that worried about it. It's for one of my stories called 'The Fifth World'.
I'm not asking you to read it, I just would appreicate if someone would go over it since I got reported for not having paragraphs for dialogue that are double spaced...

This was taken from a thread on writing guidelines: Paragraphs. These are a must. A story with no spacing between paragraphs is so hard on the readers' eyes, but aside from that I can keep you off the approved authors list so please abide by this simple rule:
You must have a line's space between dialogue.
E.g. "I don't know what to do," complained Jerry.

"Yeah I wouldn't know what to do either," I replied honestly.

Also, make sure to have paragraphs in your story, it mustn't be a huge chunk of text. Everytime you feel an oncoming sentence is a new whole in itself or doesn't fit with the rest of the paragraph, space and create a new one!


I'm guessing my story is wrong? Paragraphs in dialogue wise? Hmmm. Ta.
June 17th, 2010 at 11:56am