Is it really that bad?

I've been writing my story, but no one seems to be reading it or commenting on it. I would at least like some criticism to help me write, and progress with my story. I really hope this isn't too much to ask. Just a few more readers, a few more comments. In fact, I'd even do the same for you! If you comment on my story, I'll comment on yours! Now, doesn't that make a happier, more peaceful world?

Well this is all for me, if you don't want to comment, then just PM me saying you read it, (don't lie!), and I'll read one of your stories.