Can i ask something?

THEY THOUGHT WRONG
is my new story
still working on it and updating
its not goona be long, prolly only 10 chapters at the most
i need readers and commenters
i need comments to know if this story is any good
i will comment back of course on anything of yours
I am just simply asking for your opinion on this story. plz?lol
oh and if you have any ideas plz let me know cuz i am taking anything i can get including constructive criticism
I am a beginner so that might help you understand why i need your inputs
but thats all this is about
haha i am begging for your opinions

k well laterzzz :)