Comment Swap

Hello again. I've decided to try this 'whore your stories' thing. I guess it works for some people. Let's see if it works for me. Leave a story you want me to read and comment on in the comments below. Please click on my user and read my story. I only have one and it's unfinished but I'd really like to know how I'm doing so far. Be honest and don't be afraid to tell me if my story just totally sucks. I can take it and I want to know if I'm wasting my time on it. Tell me what I need to know. Scratch my back and I'll scratch yours. I'm not afraid to beg. I'm desperate. Can you tell? Please and Thank you =].