Okay, yes I've been over this a million times. I've changed things before and in the long run I'm never satisfied. I feel it's sloppy and badly written at times, but what bothers me most is the marriage thing. And I don't feel like I've put Gage at his full potential. He should be better, less weak. It's a little hard to explain how I feel about this story at the moment. Sooooo...
I think I'm going to delete it. I have another story in mind (and maybe a sequel to Just a Little Sadistic - but that's unlikely.) But the whole marriage thing is really getting to me, it feels cliche. And I would hate to rewrite this AGAIN and have there be a different plot. It would make more sense to just start a new story. Don't you think?
Anyway, I've been thinking of a totally new story, I don't know if it'll involve demons or vampire or any of that nonsense. I enjoy reading about that more than writing it myself. So things are a little sketchy right now. If I can think of something new, then sure, I'll start another story. But we'll see what happens.
(Not like anyone is going to read this nonsense anyway.)