battle comment swap

Hello. I have noticed that asking people to review my story as a whole is pointless as it is too long. Instead I am going to pick out parts that need reviewing and ask people who write about that sort of thing to help out if they could. For instance I am terrible at battle scenes but I have one in my story Jasmine. Anyone got any tips?

I know I am being pesky but I really value peoples opinion on this.

If anyone can think of any other ideas then please tell me. Also how do you do bold and italics and such because I have no clue.
July 24th, 2010 at 05:45pm