Well, after looking through my first chapter I have decided to redo most of it, adding a prologue to start with. I have been on Scribophile and have seen how poorly written my story actually is.
ok so here is what is happening.
1.Jasmine is getting a prologue.
This is essentially the first paragraph or so but since the writing style is different, I have decided to take it out of the actual chapter.
2.The blocks of description are being removed.
Yup that's right, I am cutting back on my blocky descriptions.
3. mystery is the game
I am trying to make this a mysterious chapter. You should not know who is who quite yet nor should you know so much about Jasmine.
4. That wood.
The wood is going to be described differently. I will also make it clear that the wood was much bigger than I have described it.
well that is it. I hope I don't disappoint people by changing it.
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