so tell me hat you think

I redid my first chapter of Jasmine and now I would like your opinions. Tell me if it is better or worse than it was before.

On a different note, my friend confused the hell out of me. He made me think he knew about something he shouldn't have but boy was I wrong. Thankfully I found out what he meant and I managed to not tell im what was up. I can't standit when my friend does that, tell me only a bit of what he knows about a situation involving me.

also, toy story 3 is cool. Much better than the second one.