please help

I need people to read chapter one of Jasmine and comment. I wouldn't usually be demanding but I need to hear opinions. I also would like comments on it's sequel The Dark Twins.
I will try and comment swap are anything but pretty please comment on mine.
I would prefer poem comments though.

Thank you if you respond.

grr the word count on this is rediculous. I just want to ask a simple, short question.

oh well. I need a pick me up so if anyone has humorous poems I would love to read them and I will comment on them.

on a different note all together. Does anyone have those days where you feel it isn't worth getting up, you feel so down that you just wish the day was over even as it is just beginning.
August 3rd, 2010 at 02:15pm