Stories...

So my stories have received some bad reviews..
I am grateful for the advice.
I am gonna take most of them down and look over them and edit them.
So thanks for the the advice and I am truly grateful :D

I miss my dad.....
He lives in the Isle of Mann, you can only there by plane or boat :(.
I only see him three times a year.

What’s the difference between Wayne Rooney and Shrek?
Shrek can save the day.

^^^
That joke cheered me up.

Questions ?
1) How has your day been ??
2)Any story recommendations ??
3)Any song recommendations ??

Love
Jodie