I wrote a new story! comment swap?

I just submitted a new story, that I really like the idea behind. It and Carnage are my babies. As of right now, all I have up is the prologue but I'd really like some feed back on it.

So, comment swap on Resemblance

Please give me a good comment, I really would like to know genuine opinions of what I have. More will be written soon.

Also, I have not forgotten about Carnage that will be updated soon.

I have some rules:

Please comment first.
Please leave me something worth while.
Since mine isn't long please don't leave me something long.

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September 28th, 2010 at 05:30am