I'm working on a new song and i just want to know how you a viewers think it is going so far. it's only 5 lines long right now but I'm stuck, so here it is:
Do you remember those da-ays
Those funn-y days
Just you and me in the park
I kiss your check
You look at me and, smile
That's all i have have at the moment i just really want some peoples opinions. so comment if you like I'd love to hear your opinion negative or positive right now I'd love to hear from both side. thank you for reading enjoy the rest of your day as you please... if you want to.
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