comment swap/questions

So I just wrote my first one shot.
And I really like it.
And I would really appreciate some feedback from you lovelies..

So if you read it and comment it, or comment me personally,
I will read ANYTHING of yours, and comment it.

Also:

A few questions for yahhh.

[1] How was your day?
[2] What is your favorite song and/or artist?
[3] Would anyone what to cowrite a story with me?

Hahahah, you don't have to answer the last one,
(1) My day was really good for some reason. I didn't have to work, and I didn't have any homework. So I got to write all night. :)
(2) Favorite song; right now: Better Than Better Could Ever Be.
Favorite artist is a toss up between Cady Groves and The Maine.

unless you're seriously interested. Hahah

xxoo
Tyra