comment swaps anyone?

i just got This Side Of Paradise and i really want to know what you guys think of it! i haven't been writing for...i don't even know, but i want some feed back on it. some critiquing would be nice just try to be gentle about it please? like if you hate it, DON'T be like "omg, that was a piece of crap!" anyway i just needed somethings to say just so i can post this journal! comment on it and i'll comment back on your chosen story!

oh and of course, you get what you give. if you write me a short one liner, i'll write a one liner back okay? oh and once i've commented back on your story, i'll delete your comment just so there's not so much clutter!
December 30th, 2010 at 03:42am