Just Be You - BLURB.

Hey everyone; I just wrote up a quick blurb of a scene coming up soon in my new story "Just Be You" and I was wondering if you wants to read it and see what you think?

Here it is:

 I had the round, bright yellow ball at my feet as I jogged down the miniature field. I kept my head up as I held the ball within my grasp and saw movement to my right. As I realized I was getting nowhere near the net because the defense were ready on their toes, I decided to pass the ball to the roughly 6 foot tall, dark-haired, hazel-eyed boy who was playing in the middle. He was expecting my pass and received it in one touch and was effortlessly moving it forward and closer to the net as I saw it. He saw it too, I realized as his eyes sparked up. An opening. I went for it and ran forward in behind the old man with thinning black and grey hair who was the defender in the middle. Just as I turned my back towards the net and my face towards the boy I saw the size five ball rolling towards me at a quick pace. I received the ball smoothly, turned my body bringing the ball with it and put all my power and will into my shot. The older man with blonde hair who was the goalie attempted to get the ball by stretching himself out; but he couldn't get to it as it curved right around his hand and neatly into the back of the top right hand corner of the net.

 "Whoa." I whispered to myself in amazement. "That was a beauty! Great shot!" the blonde haired man said as he got up off his knees. "Thanks." I mumbled quickly as I turned away to get set to play some more. "Good work Liz!" my dad shouted from where he was playing defense on our side of the field. "That was an amazing shot, nice finish." I heard someone say deeply. I looked up as I responded, "Tha-". I looked up and saw that it was the boy who had made the excellent pass to me. He looked around my age, maybe a year older. He was smiling at me. Oh gosh, I'm suppose to say something right? "Thanks, but I couldn't have shot if you didn't give me that perfect pass." I finally responded blushing profoundly. "We're a good team I guess." he said smoothly, still smiling. "I guess so." I said as I ran back to my position to play the rest of the game.

Thank you ! Comment please and go check out the first chapter of the actual story on my profile.
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January 3rd, 2011 at 03:54am