1st One-Shot revised!!! Comment Swap? I will read 2 of your stories! =)

So, i have written the one-shot "I Will Love You Forever" twice. The first version is still up, but i rewrote the ending and titled it "I Will Love You Forever V.2" The change happens after she asks Blake why he came. I would really love if you could read both of them, and tell me what you think! Once you read one version, you will only have to read a few paragraphs of the other. The reason i did this is because many readers mentioned the ending was a bit to expected...so i tried to change it up. =) Also, some said the ending felt rushed, so i tried to fix that as well...hopefully it worked...anyways, i would love if you culd read both of them and tell me which one you liked more! Also, since you are reading 2 of them, i will comment on 2 of your stories!!! SO, please tell me which ones. I will comment on both of them after reading them thoroughly. Thank you so much! It truly means a lot! Also, if i don't comment today, don't worry. I promise to comment ASAP, but I do have finals the comming week, so i might be a bit busy right now...Thank you though!

Sam
January 16th, 2011 at 04:52am