So I was doing the dishes like I do every night and all of a sudden I get this tune in my head and words start flowing out of my mouth. I grabbed a notebook and started writing them all down and now I have a song... or at least a part of a song. I want your guys's opinions on it. I really don't think its good, but then again I never like anything I write haha. Here is a taste of it-
I hide my feelings inside a box
Standing strong just like a rock
I will not let go
this will not be the end.
Because the pain inside me,
is never lying.
And the battle raging
has only just begun.
[Chorus]
Ignoring all the backwards glances
The second chances
No matter what I say,
I will never be just fine
Like I said, this is only a taste of it but I'm really curious to know what you all think of it. Honest comments please?
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