My Stories Bring All The Mibbians to the Yard and They're Like, You Wanna Comment Swap?

Damn right, I wanna comment swap.

So I have finally, finally, finally finished my story Perfection and I'm actually happy with my work for a change. Usually, I'm always worrying that I should have ended things a different way or so-and-so shouldn't have died / disappeared. Or that they shouldn't gotten eaten by that lion / tiger / bear. (Oh My!)

So I haven't participated in a comment swap before so bear with me. But if you leave a story you want me to comment / criticize, I will. Also, it would be nice if you could comment / criticize on the story I mentioned above. I entered it in a contest called, What's In A Name? and some suggestions and what-not would be the bee's knees.

Other than that, I don't have much to say except that I hope I can get some lovely Mibbians out there to throw me a bone and help me out.